Wednesday, September 24, 2008
Question
I've been writing a weight gain story.
The question I have is about pacing. I've written about 4 chapters of it, without a hint of weight gain. There's probably 2 more before weight gain is even mentioned. Is there an appetite for this sort of slow build?
The question I have is about pacing. I've written about 4 chapters of it, without a hint of weight gain. There's probably 2 more before weight gain is even mentioned. Is there an appetite for this sort of slow build?
// posted by Charlotte @ 7:41:00 PM 
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Keep the chapters coming. I love the allusion you have made with the Arabian Nights. You are a good writer!
I too enjoy, but a mind teaser, a well placed comment, a question, would greatly add.
Tony
Tony
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: 8:38 AM
: 8:38 AM
I think there is definitely an appetite for it. Of course it doesn't hurt if the first 6 chapters are especially enthralling and the weight gain is particularly fun once it comes up...
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